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Wednesday 5 December 2018

Timeus Freestyle Writing Reflection

On a school trip, there was a girl named lucy and she went on a journey to a school trip. She was going on a school to the zipline at the forest. When the girl was at the forest she come up across a post that was seen from a mile and in that post is a line that was attached to the tree all the way to the the other side of the forest.

The girl seemed really anxious and also nervous because she had never done this kind of trip in a very long time but only including trail walks and more. So the girl went up to the post and but before she had to climb up the post, she had to get equipped with some useful equipment and able to make sure that she ‘lucy’ will be able to fall all the way down the forest. As she was climbing up to the post she was feeling really scared and also nervous because when she was climbing up the post, she was about to throw up because she was afraid of heights and couldn’t even handle the drop that is below all the way to the ground.

When she reached to the top, she was waiting for her turn to attached her hook to the line and able to zip line through and all the way to the other side of the forest. There were only 5 people that are waiting for there turn on the top while there were only 26 kids that were on standby down at the ground. A few minutes later, there were only 2 more people left and still lucy was getting to scared because it will be only her when the rest of the people are all at the other side of the forest and so it comes.

Lucy fear were heights and she was getting really scared of the fact that she had to be confident and also able to ride the zipline all the way to the other side of the forest. So when there were no people left then she decided that she needed a moment to take a break and think it over with herself to see if she can do it.

Then later after that, the instructor told lucy if she is ready to zipline and she said ‘yes’, Her heart was pumping like a motor of the car and it was going very fast and that she couldn’t believe that she was actually going to zipline all the way and it felt like she was about to faint. So the instructor told her to attach her hook to line and then after that the instructor did a double-check to see if she is ready and making sure that she is safe to zipline all the way to the other side of the forest. When she was fully checked then she was ready to zipline When the instructor said ‘3, 2, 1, GO!!’.

She raced all the way through the forest like an airplane flying through the sky and lucy on the other hand was getting so pumped that she actually shouted and cheering to herself and she was going crazy and the fact that she couldn’t even stand the fact that she had ride a zipline for the first time and so she was getting so pumped that she actually told herself that she wanted to go again for another ride.

And so when she at the end of the ziplining, she took off her equipment and she was feeling very excited that she wanted to go on another ride for zipline and being able to excite her with happiness.

WALT: Freestyle write about an image.

Toda our teacher asked us to write a story about a picture. This is what I have written for my writing, The story is about a girl named lucy and she went on a school trip for ziplining.
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