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Thursday, 29 March 2018

Timeus Poetry About the Glaziery Pool Of Lagoon Reflection


POETRY TEMPLATE
Remember the S.L.A.M. prompts
S
Structure
  • How are the line breaks structured?
  • How are the stanzas organised?
  • Is there punctuation? What does it look like?
  • How does the structure affect the meaning of the poem?
L
Language
  • Is there figurative language present? (simile, metaphor, alliteration,, onomatopoeia, )
  • Are there sound devices present? (rhythm, rhyme, repetition)
  • Is there sensory language in the poem?
A
Affect
  • Mood - How does the poem make you feel? What emotions are evoked because of the language being used?
  • Tone - How does the author feel or want you to feel when you read the
  • poem?
M
Message
  • What is the subject of the poem? (What is the poem mainly about?)
  • Is there symbolism? What is the deeper meaning of the symbols used in the poem?
  • What is the central message or theme of the poem?
  • Why is the t i t l e important and how does it set the context of the poem?

Title
What is the title of your poem? Make it catchy
Glaziery pool of lagoon
Stanza 1
Introduce the topic of your poem through descriptive vocabulary and language
I saw lifeguards that were very creepy and they look like they were a mouse being so quiet and always observing the area like they are wearing glasses. Why would they named themselves ‘lifeguards’ if they are guards but not that they can come back to life.
Stanza 2
Use figurative language to creatively describe the topic of your poem
Water waving the wind around making it way way way coolier which is so breeze. SPLASH!, water pouring down like a slow motion moment and into that person's face like a person that is crying with fear and water dripping down into the concrete. Then it goes PLOOP onto the ground creating an outrageous echo throughout the distance in a place like the scary dark alley or tunnel.
Stanza 3
Use figurative language to creatively describe the topic of your poem
When I came out of the dressing room in the boys changing room. People were like raging throughout the corridor creating chaos everywhere. People that are screaming makes it echo again which I can hear it when they are talking like they are in the mall. I can’t understand a word they are saying because of the echoey that are sounding like someone is speaking to me making it so difficult to hear.
Final Stanza
What message are you wanting the reader to understand?
Always enjoy the nice beautiful sun across the horizon and think of the things about going inside a pool that is so chilling and even if you have no air conditioner but outside it is hot then relax in a nice cold pool.
WALT: Learn about what is Fugitive Language and also What it means by writing something that it looks like a Poetry?

Hi my name is Timeus and today I am going to be talking about my reflection about Poetry. This poetry is all about the 'Glaziery Pool Of Lagoon', This was my title because I wanted to be able to make it catchy so that it can describe what am I saying to the reader. What you are seeing is that all of these 4 are all stanza which it would stand for paragraphs as the same but in poetry it is called a stanza. Each of these paragraphs can be written by describing something that they Saw, What they Hear and What they smell like. In stanza 1, You have to write a introduction about what you saw when doing poetry, This is what I have for my Poetry and I hope you enjoyed this blog post

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Wednesday, 28 March 2018

Timeus Describing Panmure Lagoon Pools Reflection


Hi my name is Timeus and today I am going to be talking about my reflection about describing the things that we know about the Panmure Lagoon Pools in New Zealand. There are six fugitive language that we are working on for our work that we are doing. Metaphor, Simile, Hyperbole, Personification, Alliteration and Onomatopoeia. I am going to be talking about these six things that we all know for our work. The first one that I am going to be talking about is Metaphor. This is the same as a simile because it is helping you to tell the reader what it looks like and how it means. Then the next one is simile, This one is very interesting for me because this will help me with my writing, It means that some sentences help you describe it using the words like or as. Some of these things that will actually help you throughout your writing.

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Timeus Obama Visit New Zealand Reflection

Hi my name is Timeus and today I am going to be talking about reflection about Obama Visiting New Zealand. So today I am going to be talking about it. When I was getting dropped off by my mom, I heard on the radio that obama came to New Zealand for something that me and my mum don't know. But when I read in the article, I know that Obama came to New Zealand on a Private Jet plane from singapore to New Zealand and then the Obama family landed on the airport. They had security with them so that people will not gain up on the president to make them feel safe and also not get attacked by other people, When he came he was getting a hotel or a house at bay of islands and he decided that he wanted to play golf with a Former Prime Minister John Key, They and the prime minister were having a great conversation about things that they were doing and also politics, And talking about things are happening in america or how is it at america.
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Monday, 26 March 2018

Timeus Kiwisport And Volleyball Reflection

Hi my name is Timeus and today I am going to be talking about my reflection that I did today. We were doing Kiwisport and Volleyball (P.E) but we were Separated into our groups, so homegroup one was going first to kiwisport and Homegroup 2 which it is my group stayed at the courts for P.E lesson which is Volleyball. In volleyball for P.E, We were doing some exercise that was relating to volleyball so what we did is that we were shuffling around the court line. The reason why we did this is because it is to help us move around the court when we are playing and also to always be confident to try and hit the ball to the next person of the court, this makes it easier for that person to know how to always get that energy to move with your legs. 

One of the things that helped me do this is that it helps me to the circulation of my body so that you have enough energy to trained. The next thing that we did is about learning how to play Volleyball. In this sport you have come across 6 people in each team. So two people will stand in the front, The other person has to stand on the middle then another two people will go to the back and the server is the opposite corner of the  court will have to serve the ball to over the net so that the game will get started of the match. One of the things you must not do is that you not allowed to hit the ball with your palm because wanted you do that then you will get called by the ref (For short) and the ball will go over to the next server of the enemy group and this makes it easier. The only way you have to not smack the ball is when you are using your wrist is if the ball will do a little smack but it won't make this a penalty.

After we finished P.E then we head to Kiwisport for tennis to practice on what we did from our previous lesson. So what we did is that we were learning how to serve the ball using a ball and a racket. One of the things that you must do when you are serving the ball is that you have to put your left leg forward and your right leg backward so that you have a lot of power and you can hit the ball harder, this makes it easier for the person that is serving to always have to hit the ball really hard again but not going over the back line or else this will considered as a out of bounds.

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Timeus Writing Reflection

Hi my name is Timeus and today I am going to be talking about reflection about writing. The reason why I will be talking about my writing is so that It will help you to develop more of your thinking and also being able to use your critically thinking properly and also yourself. So that is why I am going to be talking about my reflection that I did today with mrs Komor. Today we were learning about figurative language. But first what we learned at our previous lesson of writing is all about simile. What I know about the word simile is that it is all about comparing into two different types of things for your writing. This word was very interesting because it is very important when you are writing a sentences on your books and so it will increase your learning and also again your critically thinking. The reason why I think that this is the way to learn all about writing is that it is to help you gather knowledge of what it means by this and also to always think of what you are going to write something that you are willing to write. Then the next word we were learning is Onomatopoeia. The word Onomatopoeia is all about the sounds that we make and the animals make. For example, Bark, Mooo ( Cow Sound) and also Tweet-tweet-tweet ( Makes bird sound). When you are reading a book or something and you are finding a word that is saying 'bark' but then they think it is just a word but it makes the sound at also it points to the character that is making that sound which makes it easier for the reader to read so that the reader will know that it is a onomatopoeia which makes sounds. This word is very important for the reader to know so that he/she can get better reading the book of what she reading. That is for my reflection and I hope you will understand what it all means now because you were able to build knowledge throughout your learning of your reading and also writing and also you get better of doing that.

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Wednesday, 21 March 2018

Timeus Tai Chi Lesson #4 Reflection

Hi my name is Timeus and today I am going to be talking about reflection about my Day of Tai Chi. In Tai Chi, We had Mr Gordon with us again to reflect on what we did the other day for Tai Chi. What we learned about is that we were learning each stances that we got teached such as the dragon stance, the crane stance and other stance. This was good to reflect on what we did in the other session so that we can how to reflect properly and also it will help you with your critically thinking. I think that next time we should do more games every wednesday so that we can learn what it means and also how it works in each of the powerful. Speaking of powerful words, One of the words that we learning about this on Tai Chi is the 'Listening'. I think that this word is very important to me because it helps you to listen to someone that is talking and also to help you with the things that you sometimes don't know. For example, when you are like at are army or something like that then you must pay attention to your role that you have to do. If you don't follow the role and you were not listening then you will have consequences with your life and also other people around you. So that is why you have to always follow your goal or instructions without getting asked help and you will get in trouble. This think really helped me with my learning because I wanted to be able to show confidence towards other people and also to each other in my family. So next time when I am either presenting or saying a speech to the audience then I must have Courage to show confidence towards each other and so that I won't have to be shy of doing something that I don't like doing. But that's not the only word that we learned from each lesson. Mr gordon wanted to learn the word control but he got stuck in a traffic and his car broke down the other day and he decide to cancel the lesson and decided to wait for the next day next week. But yeah the word 'control is a really powerful word to learn. Sometimes when I am at school I usually came up with these sort of circumstances and it makes it difficult for me to learn or even when I feel angry or something I don't know how to control my emotions with other people that are interacting with me. So that is why I think that this word is very important to me because it helps me to build my Hauora towards myself and also to always not get in the way with other people around me. So next time when I get into the fact that I cannot control my angry then the word 'Control' will help me throughout my life because I can now control myself from others around me, I think to myself that this was the best opportunity to go to Tai Chi so that you can build yourself some thinking of your brain and also you circulation of your own body. The next word I am going to be discussing today from our previous lesson is all about being 'Aware' of yourself. Sometimes your going to the shop to buy something and you decided to go to the parking lot all by yourself and you might think that you are facing your fear around because you don't know how to go by yourself, so you always have to be aware of other people around you because they can really trouble around you if you are not carefully to others, Some other people are nice but you think that person will let you go into his car and drove to somewhere else without are car. So that is why you have to always be aware of yourself around you. 

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Friday, 16 March 2018

Timeus Kiwisport & Cricket Reflection 2018

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Today I am going to be talking about my reflection about what I did at school. The reason why I wanted to be able to show to you guys my reflection is so that you might be reflect on you have did as well. So what I did today is that I went to cricket because the other home team group decided to go to Kiwisport which is Tennis. So we went to cricket to play a game of the sport at the field. 

I really like this game because it helps me to build my hauora throughout my learning and also to take a break to also get fresh air so that it can help me to improve more of my physical learning. This is better than just staying home all else you will not be in good shape and so that is why it is important to always go outside and play sports so that I can always focus on what I would have to do.

Saturday, 10 March 2018

Timeus Tai Chi Lesson #2 For 2018 Reflection



Today I am going to be talking about my reflection of my Tai Chi Lesson that I did on Wednesday. What I did at the Tai Chi lesson is that we were able to reflect on what we did at our previous lesson and also to just also reflect on what moves we did. What I found very challenging about this is that I would sometimes forget the moves that we did from our last lesson but now Mr gordon which is our instructor showed us the same stance and moves and stances. This makes it easier for me to know which is which and also to reflect on our movements of it.

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Friday, 9 March 2018

Timeus What Do We All Know About Tobruk? Reflection



Today I am going to be talking about my reflection about my work. My work is about knowing what things that we know about tobruk, first of all it was hard for me to research about Tobruk because there were no history about it but now I know that it was the natives that came to this street because I think that they were here for shelter and also to build one of the first houses to be built as well. What found very challenging about this work was that it very hard to find out where it all started at first when I was doing my work but now know that the natives came here in World War II to be protected by those who tried to find them so this makes it easier to learn about the street of Tobruk.

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Tuesday, 6 March 2018

Timeus PB4L - Positive Behaviour Reflection


Today I am going to be talking about what it means by 'PB4L'. This word is what its like to show positive behaviour. For example when you are playing in the park or something and you see a person coming up to you and said if he wanted to play with you but you said no. But the only way to change that is if you ask him nicely that he can let you play with you because this person has nothing to do. And that is it for this reflection about our PB4L.

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Friday, 2 March 2018

Timeus Maths Test Reflection

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Hi my name is Timeus and today I am going to be talking about my test that I did today. The reason is because I wanted to reflect on what I have learnt on my maths test. For this were doing a Maths Test or PAT test to see if we have learnt something from our maths skills. First we started to go to the questions of Example. It was giving us a example of what the questions is going to look like or How you might be sure of answering this question. These questions were easy because it had a description that told us to click which answer that is best. I got stressed as I moved on to the real questions, so I decided to take my time and work on what I am doing. I felt very happy when the test was over and I was able to finish on time and also everyone else. One of the questions that found me very interesting and easy was the example. And the reason why I like the example is because its to gives us some help just in case we either get stuck or we don't know what the answer is for the question. But one of the most and very difficult questions that actually found me challenged about this is about the grid in maths. It was very hard to answer these because I never know what it is and how works but one thing I need to improve is to work on more maths so that I would be able to get better on maths and also when I am having a Maths test then I won't be able to get the answer wrong or pass the questions.
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Thursday, 1 March 2018

Timeus Pool Reflection


on Tuesday we went to the lagoon pools and it was fun at their because their were a lot of students that came to the pools for our picnic day and also the parents as well and I was so excited to go to the pools because I wanted to enjoyed the last year of my school and also for my leadership skills. It was the best day to go for a swim as well because it was raining and everyone just didn't care about the rain so they decided to go for a swim in the rain which it was fun.

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Timeus Technology Reflection Day 3

Today I am going to be talking about my reflection about technology. In graphics we were developing a phone stand using significant dough called clay. Clay cannot be soft in/out of the place which it can only produce air inside the clay, the only way it will work is that it needs heat to make it softer so that when you feel the clay you can see or feel that it will feel soft but not hard. So we were making a phone stand out of clay because I think that it is a good idea to use clay so that we can make our own even from the past they use clay to make and object that looks like the same as a normal object. Here is a phone stand on our compare & contrast.

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